Elemental Fang

[DarkNerd]

T'was but a pretty shitty Nuzlocke comic.
However, just before the 7 gym, something magical happened.
I bought Anime Studio 9.
The result being that it is no longer a comic, but an animated webseries in the making!
Trailer: http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=_Q4DXayxsCM

You might be wondering, "But DarkNerd, this is a shameless self-advertisement!"
And if you're not, then read the rules.

And while it technically is, I put it here with a reason.
You see, the series features several character. Shinx, Luxio, Luxray, Bidoof, Biberal, another slightly different Biberal, Starly with shades, Staravia with shades, Staraptor with shades, Starly without Shades, etc., Budew, Roselia, Roselia with an eyepatch, Roserade with an eyepatch, a Buizel, a male and female Floatzel, a Drifloom, Drifblim, and so on.
As you can see, that's quite a large amount. And not even half of the characters. Probably a third. Maybe less.
So, I need some assistance. In order to do that, however, you must know the style. As such, I will need to complete episode 1.
However, you might ask, "Then why post it now?"

I answer, because I want constructive criticism.

[Arjahn]

Well I like the illustrations, you can tell that you're a good drawer. Not a big fan of the music and really generic text, but it still does look interesting.

Oh, and for those of you who want a link and aren't on a mobile device, here ya'll go.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_Q4DXayxsCM

[DarkNerd]

I know, my first time using Anime Studio 9. I'm aiming for flashier text next time.
I personally like the song, but, truth be told, it does have evil associated with it.'06, as I've heard.

Thanks for the link, I was unable to post the link because mobile sucks.

[Berry]

Try mixing an 80's show concept to your "Elemental Fang" and see what happens.

[DarkNerd]

What do you mean?

[Berry]

(01-22-2013 04:35 PM)DarkNerd Wrote:  What do you mean?

Ok,umm.well by what i mean is give it an 80's show elements (such as the cheesy characters,cheesy lines, exaggeration on some points,crazy plotline,hippies,some moral crap etc.)

like these for example:

Spoiler (Click to View)

[DarkNerd]

Ah. I see.