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RE: Book about gamers
I had a quick read of your snippet, and the grammar is mostly fine. The main thing is that I'd look out for run-on sentences that could detract some readers (your second sentence alone counts 48 words and 7 clauses).

On the whole though, your writing style and grammar are good.

[spoiler]I'm not just saying all of this randomly, I've actually done copy-editing in the past Cool[/spoiler]
02-17-2013 10:15 AM
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Book about gamers - T.H.E.E. - 02-11-2013, 12:13 AM
RE: Book about gamers - T.H.E.E. - 02-17-2013, 08:48 AM
RE: Book about gamers - Psychospacecow - 02-17-2013, 08:52 AM
RE: Book about gamers - SERIOUSLY THOUGH - 02-17-2013, 08:55 AM
RE: Book about gamers - T.H.E.E. - 02-17-2013, 09:22 AM
RE: Book about gamers - Mass Distraction - 02-17-2013, 09:29 AM
RE: Book about gamers - T.H.E.E. - 02-17-2013, 09:40 AM
RE: Book about gamers - Mass Distraction - 02-17-2013, 09:48 AM
RE: Book about gamers - Psychospacecow - 02-17-2013, 10:23 AM
RE: Book about gamers - Mass Distraction - 02-17-2013, 10:36 AM
RE: Book about gamers - SERIOUSLY THOUGH - 02-17-2013 10:15 AM
RE: Book about gamers - T.H.E.E. - 02-17-2013, 08:09 PM
RE: Book about gamers - SERIOUSLY THOUGH - 02-18-2013, 11:08 PM
RE: Book about gamers - Mass Distraction - 02-17-2013, 08:45 PM
RE: Book about gamers - T.H.E.E. - 02-17-2013, 09:05 PM
RE: Book about gamers - T.H.E.E. - 02-18-2013, 08:20 PM
RE: Book about gamers - T.H.E.E. - 02-19-2013, 12:04 AM

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