Lone's Genuine "A" Grade Writing Stuffs

[LoneWanderer]

Small Excerpt From A Planned Novel: [spoiler]There he stood, reveling in the silence. He knew it wouldn't last. He knew the screams of the bodies that now lie lifeless at his feet would haunt him. At this point, he didn't care. His friends murdered, Liev's return, and his control of the wolf was slipping. Liev wanted to corrupt him, to make him into the killing machine he was created to be. Liev's biggest regret would be, that he succeeded. This war, Vikkael's war, had begun in earnest. He was out for blood.[/spoiler]

More to follow. Hope you enjoy.

[LoneWanderer]

Broken: [spoiler]Broken piece of a broken mind, The kind that won't heal in time. A chest left hollow from years of abuse, "Alive" is a fading memory.


The shell of a man, walks this world alone. Knowing he'll never have someone to call his home. Bleeding or breathing, he can't remember which. He struggles desperately, to find that one look.


Broken piece of the broken man. He'd pick it up, but it's not like it will be used again. Shattered like glass, this broken man mourns. The feeling of love, he once adored. He walk and walks and walks some more, forever forgotten and heard of no more.[/spoiler]

[SERIOUSLY THOUGH]

Couple of grammar issues but other than that -



You should take a peek at the Haiku Thread and give us some of your workin'

[LoneWanderer]

(08-26-2012 04:43 PM)SERIOUSLY THOUGH Wrote:  Couple of grammar issues but other than that -



You should take a peek at the Haiku Thread and give us some of your workin'

Thank you.

I'll give it a look.

[LoneWanderer]

It won't let me post this for some reason. So, I'll just provide a link. http://lonewanderalchemist.deviantart.co...-323510777

[SERIOUSLY THOUGH]

I have to sign up or log in to see that content. Do you have a mirror for something that doesn't need signing up ?

[LoneWanderer]

Hmmm, try this. http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/2...clyih.html

[Berry]

Damn,That reminds me that i was planning to write a book when i was 19.Oh well,There is always the mid-thirties -_-

[LoneWanderer]

Never too late to give it a go.